If I Die in a School Shooting... - ID# 50

Glenbrook South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A public service announcement for Everytown for Gun Safety. Students protest for gun control. Written permission to use "Destiny Unknown" by De Wolfe Music

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 7:10 pm - Outstanding shots and overall message. This was a simple concept that was executed beautifully. I love the opening shot of the hallway and different locations used. Very clear audio in the voice over.
• 4/22 12:07 pm - This is one of my favorite PSA's. This was well constructed with the shots, voice overs, and I also appreciate the diversity with gender, race, and to include the statement with the dog - well done. Great job.

Judge 1

Positives: Powerful message and well executed. Great story. Good images.

Improvements: Some shots not as strong as others. Needed to slow down some of the effects a bit. But really good work.

Judge 2

Positives: nice smooth camera work and lighting in many of the shots. Simple concept, well executed.

Improvements: signs could have been a bit more legible. Lighting might have been more dramatic in a few of the scenes, like outside or in the library. Sometimes color-correction can compensate in shots where the lighting needs help, using vignettes, windows to lighten key areas, etc.

Judge 3

Positives: The hall way dolly shot The audio and music worked well

Improvements: Who gave you the stats? Are they made up? Maybe a little closer on the face of the students to give it more of a personal appeal.

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