Bunker Buddies - ID# 506

New Trier

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

By Henry Armstrong, Ryan Ellis, Liam Gagliardi & Ryan Zabors. For MMEA Film Fest 2019 consideration in the "Comedic Narrative" category

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 10:18 pm - Strong narrative concept. Good acting by each character. The story paced relatively well, and the conflict was clear. The shots were largely well focused and composed. The main area of improvement was editing. The story had good pace, but the cuts were very jumpy. Work on utilizing J and L cutting when moving between speakers during conversation. This will give a less jumpy pace and allow us to see reactions from characters as opposed to only seeing them speak. The audio was well done. Good piece, but continue to work on your editing skills moving forward.
• 4/21 9:33 am - Camera shots were well composed. Dialogue was well written. Good performances throughout the production. Good use of music and sound effects.
• 4/12 11:37 am - Good use of j-cuts w/dialogue, audio needs some work along with some white balance issues (color temp yellow @ times) and holding focus at times. Sam character is funny, plays the part well and got some laughs with his portrayal of the needy and hapless neighbor.

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