Life on Mars - ID# 51
Glenbrook South
Dramatic Narrative
Entry Description
Two highschool loners seek out a way to fit in and find out just how cruel the world can be. Music credits to Emmett Garvey and Josh Liss as the band "Kevin" with written permission and DeWolfe music with written permission.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/26 6:57 am - Liked the beginning, my mind raced in a variety of directions as I was intrigued with your shots and wondering where it was going. However, it didn’t go as far as I had hoped. I felt like I kept waiting for something to happen and it took a long time to get there. If everything was shorter, I think audiences would like it better. Don’t over act (for example the scene where they argue whether they should go or not, it just took too long) I loved all the intentionality you took in the opening shots, but after that I felt like you relied too much on your actors to tell the story instead of your audio, visuals and editing.
- 4/25 9:25 pm - The story was not also easy to follow, but I think that it was quirky and had a interesting feel to it. Almost a cult-movie following feel, if that makes sense. You had some really nice shots. I love that your fonts matched the flyer....nice consistency there. Your audio was also excellent. (Favorite shot: the record player).
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