This is Ike - ID# 514

Eisenhower

School Promotion

Entry Description

this promo is about what great things that this school has to offer

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/9 10:32 am - I like this concept of this video and that you show more of the school. The issue I have is the video has a few too many shaky shots and that is distracting. Work on getting closer shots of the subjects. When the “whoosh” happens in the music I was hoping for a speed up, let that happen, move your viewer and make them come along for the ride.Do not just zoom or pan for no purpose always have a reason for doing something
• 3/3 12:17 pm - +I like the overall concept of highlighting different aspects of the school--that's cool! -The ending graphic is fun! -the music seems very intense. more intense than the images we are seeing. -camerawork is shaky. Use a tripod next time. -You shouldn't aimlessly zoom in. Zoom in if there is a purpose.

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