This is an excerpt from Pack the Place, the double-header live girls' and boys' basketball game night. This clip is taken from the boys' basketball game.
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Positives: Audio Mix - difficult to do with loud crowd but the mix was very good. Talent - nice energy and great job telling about stories behind the game.
Improvements: Camera work was a little shaky - keeping cameras on tripods would help this broadcast look a bit more professional
Positives: Tremendous job referencing the conversation pregame with the dunker. Probably would have been ideal not to reference yourself as much, but it's great timing nonetheless. Good work, too, by the announcers noticing that the away crowd was leaving early. That helps build the scene.
Improvements: When the announcers referenced the visiting crowd leaving early, it might have been worth it to show the crowd at a dead ball. Or, when you came back to game camera, the announcers could have told the viewer to look at the top right of the screen. The crowd was filing out there. In a close game, down the stretch, it's not ideal to go to a replay during game action. The fans want to see the game, first and foremost. Generally, in a close game, you'll have a dead ball. Wait for that to give us the replay (and you did get one, here).
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