A Titan Wears Blue//Gold - ID# 54
Glenbrook South
School Promotion
Entry Description
Glenbrook South High School is home to many Titans who wear their blue and gold in a variety of ways. Every student has a unique taste in fashion, but GBS accepts all styles and so we are able to come together and be Titans who wear blue and gold. Written permission to use the song Feeling Me by TØAK.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/9 9:43 am - I like the look of this video in a visual way. I like the colors, and the lighting. The issue I have is the jumping back to people with their names, why do you keep doing this? Some of the transitions in the video become distracting for the viewer, and that makes it tough to follow and catch the focus. I like the tagline for the video, and it is good message. It might be stronger if they are all wearing a school shirt, not just the colors. Good job matching the music with the shots.
Judge 1
Positives: -Shot with badminton net: Strong framing good move, properly exposed. -Good use of existing light. -Good use of varied angles to keep the idea fresh.
Improvements: -Video FX feel shoehorned in. -Chose shots that needed controlled light, but didn't have it. -Inconsistent color temperature and depth.
Judge 2
Positives: The introduction of the various students by name and their differences helped to establish various "Titans" Split screens and variety of editing techniques employed helped to hold the audience's attention
Improvements: Vocal ? Hearing who the students were and why they wore blue and gold? Too many editing techniques were used - by the end it felt like it was a "show " of the variety of editing technique instead of developing a consistent style.
Judge 3
Positives: Quick and easy. The "plot" was simple with different clothing options. I especially like the editing tricks and variety.
Improvements: Maybe some sub-text to let the view know what they are wearing, besides just blue and gold. Also, a little more enthusiasm from your actors.
Judge 4
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