MSI - ID# 544

Southland College Prep

News Package

Entry Description

A DAY OFF FROM SCHOOL TURNS INTO FUN AT THE MUSEUM OF SCIENCE & INDUSTRY.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 5/10 8:47 am - I like how you give information about the museum, and let people know about it ability to give students a good educational experience. You also do a good job of showing the video that you are talking about with your script. The one nat sound pop in the package is also helpful because it gives the viewer a break. There are some issues that would make the story even stronger for the viewer. it is important to make sure that the camera is on a tripod, and that it steady. Shaky shots become a distraction for the viewer and that is not what you want. Also, try to use a more diverse shots for the b-roll, and not have them on screen for longer than 3-4 seconds. The first shot of museum was up for a long time. The package would be even stronger with more interviews than just the one at the end. You could talk with more students or staff about the experience and the things that they liked while they were there. Good job of giving information, but work on fixing the little things that can make this video even stronger.

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