Vans - ID# 545

Batavia

Commercial

Entry Description

Vans are great shoes for artists, dancers, and skaters alike.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 12:48 pm - Works well - Great cinematography and shot variety. Good energy and pacing. Good concept to show a variety of people, not just skateboarders using the shoe. Needs work - Although the concept is good, the execution is confusing. How are shoes relevant to painting? Why isn't the dancer wearing the shoes? It would have been stronger to see the shoes on people who are all using them actively. This feels more like a PSA to be yourself and have fun with your hobbies, not a commercial for a shoe.
• 4/25 9:42 am - Absence of words - nice. You let the product speak for it self. In the entry description you say Vans are great shoes for artists, dancers, and skaters alike. Maybe having text on the screen in some type of slogan (Something like: Vans - for artists, dancers, and skaters alike, or Vans - for everyone) would help solidify that message. Not only are we seeing examples, but the written words are confirming it.

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