Radon Awareness Rap - ID# 550
York
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
Spreading radon awareness through the art of music, using an original song by rappers and editors Sebastian Rohn and Richard Buehling.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 7:58 pm - This was a creative take on chemical radon! Some of your shots seem to go in and out of focus and I can't tell if it is purposeful. I like the use of graphics and I'm glad you provided subtitles since this is a quick moving video.
- 4/24 9:11 am - I really enjoyed this unique rap on radon. It looks like you and your group had a lot of fun with this and I think there are two things I would adjust. One, brighten your shots. Overall the video is pretty dark and we want to see what is going on. Diversify your shots as well. Where else can radon be found...maybe that is another place to shoot. Overall, nice job.
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