It Must be the Stripes - ID# 560

Franklin High School

Commercial

Entry Description

Addidas are fast, it must be the stripes.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 10:21 pm - Really cool idea and great execution at the beginning and end. I wish you could have tied the middle shot of the runner's face in to the stripes concept in some way. Or maybe used some kind of slow mo so that movement is implied. The logo applied to the shoe was confusing and unnecessary as my students thought that it was not the right kind of shoe and that's why you did it.

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