Beat Hauntingly Good - ID# 561

Franklin High School
Commercial

Entry Description

A ghost tries to scare away a young girl but the Beats foil his plan.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/25 9:38 pm - This is a very creative idea for a commercial. It's different than the typical headphones commercial, so nice change of pace. Nice job creating the "ghost." One issue that I have is why the girl needs beats. Is it to drown out the noise of the ghost? Then, if so, you might have wanted to add sound effects of some sort.
  • 4/25 9:26 pm - You have a really good concept for a commercial here. Neat masking/opacity effect. The mask looks clean in the first part of the video but appears noticeably around 0:11. Your music works well here, but the voiceover is a little overpowering and cuts out a little too early. Overall it is a great, quick commercial!
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