Hinsdale Pool Closing - ID# 61

Lyons Township

News Package

Entry Description

This is a news package about the Hinsdale High School District 86 (Hinsdale Central and Hinsdale South) discussion regarding closing their pool. Produced by Lars Lonnroth for Lion Newspaper and LTTV.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 7:01 am - Decent story. Shots of the board members - too much headroom on those shots. Lower thirds were a little hard to read with that type of font. Good use of natural audio in the story to help tell the story. Think about your establishing shot - you want to show just how many people filled that cafeteria for that meeting - show the viewers a wide shot of the crowd. Ending - I didn’t get a good idea of “what’s next” for this situation.

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