4/25 2:17 pm - Good editing and choice of music, but shooting seems little like after thought in beginning. Focus on fundamentals of shooting rather than style.
4/24 12:38 pm - Pros - Very nice choices of location, lots of scenic beauty add to the strength of compositions and variety in general. Reels are all about demonstrating range as well as your attributes as a shooter. Manipulation of natural light makes for compelling shots at :06, :24, :43, 1:01. Cons - The glaring issue with this piece is soft shots. There were numerous shots that were out of focus or the subject was soft while the distant background was sharp. You must use focus to tell your viewer what to look at. Soft shots can be distracting and take the viewer out of what they're watching (:17, :31, :35, :54, 1:04, 1:13, 1:25). Focus is the last thing you check before you record, even when you know the shot is in focus, you still recheck it.