Bulldog Park - ID# 85

Crown Point

News Package

Entry Description

Crown Point opens the new ice rink on the square, bringing people to the park as well as area businesses.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 6:57 am - Overall, a good story. Great variety of b-roll. For a couple of the interviews, leave them on screen for a few more seconds to give viewers a chance to read their lower thirds. Ideally, you want to have them on screen for 4-5 seconds. I’m guessing your audience knows where this park is, but for those who may not, you might want to give it some reference points. “Located next to the square…” - if that’s a common location and it’s understood where it is, then you’re good. Good variety of interviews to help tell the importance of why this is a good park.

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