Depression PSA - ID# 95

Waubonsie Valley
Public Service Announcement
 

Entry Description

Public Service Announcement about seeking help for depression

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/25 7:41 pm - The girl playing your teacher looks a lot like a student! I would consider recasting this role. I also don't know if a teacher would have written an "F" that big on a paper. Some of this seemed a bit unrealistic.
  • 4/24 8:45 am - There are some negative images in this that I would re-examine. The de-booking, could it just be a non-acknowledgement, the passing back of the paper by the teacher and her disappointment, could it just be looking at the grade and being disappointment? I like the stopping of the peers negative action and I think this PSA is a couple drafts away from being great.
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