Do the Math - ID# 97

Geneva

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A unique look at the options in life. Music provided by Audio Blocks

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/26 7:03 am - I loved it, you did a great job of mixing a story, creative video, sound, and music all together. The editing pace was great, and I never got bored. The story might be simple, but you did a great job of pulling it together and keeping my interest. Loved some of your shots (the pencils falling on the floor, the go button, etc.) Great job
• 4/25 11:45 am - The story line was cohesive and made sense, it added some humor with the time machine. It was endearing. The lighting and variety of shots was executed well.

Judge 1

Positives: The cuts with the time machine appearing and disappearing was done effectively and creatively. The story was brief, but effective. Overall, I was incredibly impressed with this film.

Improvements: The acting in this film was somewhat lacking. The topic is very emotional, but the lack of effective delivery made the heart of the film suffer.

Judge 2

Positives: Most of the editing worked well. Nice performance from lead actress.

Improvements: Better script and performances.

Judge 3

Positives: The VFX are fun.

Improvements: I don't understand the story.

Judge 4

Positives:

Improvements: