The Circle - ID# 103
Homewood-Flossmoor
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
A boy left alone at home tries to hide from a cult that invades him.
Copyright Info
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lzk-l8Gm0MY https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hs9NYrBb23Y https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JaS8DdNfX_4
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 9:57 pm - Pros - very well done trailer. Follows the formula very well to introduce the problem, the players, and tease some of what's to come without giving away the whole thing. B&W was a nice touch and fits well for this piece. The production design and sound mix were complimentary of the story being told. Nice shot for the capture at the end. Cons - Not too much on the negative side; the announcer at the beginning was so casual about his warning, it was almost comical. The titling wore itself out the further the trailer played.
Judge 1
Positives: Clear, impactful premise – yet, leaves enough intrigue and works well as a teaser. Excellent edit style, in tandem with that droning, ominous music track. Great job!
Improvements: Because the trailer is in black & white – contrast can be higher to bring out light and shadow.
Judge 2
Positives: More info from dad about something weird and the "circle"
Improvements: maybe film at night rather than middle of the day
Judge 3
Positives: Wow! Captivated from start to finish! Left me with an eerie feeling! The costumes were realistic. The anticipation of having someone around the corner was very strong with left me on the edge of my seat. I liked the symbolism with the piece of paper outside his door as well. Adding the father's voice over the sharp cuts at the end was very smart! Well done! The timing of the movements matching up with the sound was great too!
Improvements: You could maybe even try switching this up from color to black and white. May make the cuts more dramatic?
Judge 4
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