The Appointment — Radon PSA - ID# 123
Riverside Brookfield
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
PSA that educates the masses about the dangers of radon.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 12:01 pm - You did a great job casting this PSA, but I wish I could have seen more than just a simple dialogue scene. You did a great job showing the chemical radon test kit. Make sure you have a clearly stated call to action at the end besides calling the number for more information. Some of your cuts felt very abrupt. I would have liked to have also seen a wide shot of both actors together. The back and for got repetitive.
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