Hard Lockdown - ID# 151

Morton East

Demonstration

Entry Description

This video will demonstrate the procedures and actions that should be taken when a hard lockdown occurs.

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: The visuals and V.O. support each other and work well in delivering the message of your project. You created an urgency with the information that you are imparting to your audience. You also did a good job in keeping your actors focused. The seriousness portrayed by them was convincing.

Improvements: Consider including a few more closeups or medium shots that focus on the expressions of the actors. Also, shoot more shots that aren't a eye level. That will help to build the drama even more.

Judge 2

Positives: I think this is a very important topic and a video like this can make a huge difference for a school population. A clear step-by-step process was conveyed and, visually, a wide variety of different scenarios were portrayed.

Improvements: The narration and sound are key for this video and the narrator could have been stronger. The reading of the step-by-step process was very flat and monotone. This piece could have benefited from a strong narrator that provided emotion within the reading and the narrator needed to space out key points while reading. Also, although this is a serious topic, the music could have supported the piece more than it had if the music choice was not as hard.

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