A Not Very Fairytale Support Group - ID# 165
Homewood-Flossmoor
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
A support group for fairytale characters, by fairytale characters.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/22 9:01 pm - Between the script, the filming, and the editing, your strongest aspect is the editing, so kudos to the technical accomplishments here.You have some nice video cuts with the dialogue and the over the shoulder shots and the movement between perspectives work pretty well and shows a nice understanding of blocking, dialogue, and following a conversation. However, the script is a bit slow, the audio is a hard to hear, and the shots are just a bit off, particularly with the over the shoulder shots. I applaud the choices you were trying to make, they are the right choices, especially with filming, you just need to hone them to get everything looking polished and professional. And the same goes with the dialogue. As for the audio, audio equipment is expensive but a simple hack is to use your phone to record the audio by placing the phone either on their lap or as close to the actor as possible and sync later. Keep at it, this group, from the actors to those behind the scenes, have a good thing going here.
- 4/20 3:24 pm - Successful - This had a very funny premise, and a good setup for comedic dialog. The acting was good, and the talent played off each other well. Needs Work - The audio seemed to be out of sync. The over-the-shoulder shots were framed oddly. There wasn't any narrative to this film, just a conversation. Overall, it wasn't very comedic.
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