Sonic Bum - ID# 207

Deerfield

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A teen's video game addiction seizes control of his academic career and personal life in this irreverent original comedy short.

Copyright Info

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MGikf8eCKMc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-s01063wSD0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uasEn_xANXE https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MnjuS-UwvpQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CvLHKUtcFg4 https://www.youtube.com/watch?

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 4:07 pm - Successful - Great cinematography and great editing. Lots of style and professional-looking work. Good premise. Needs Work - Audio levels were too low at times. The main character was a fun parody of a gamer, but at times he wasn't likable enough to be a protagonist. Were we supposed to be rooting for him, or making fun of him?
• 3/6 11:42 am - Overall the film had some very good editing techniques. In particular the match Cuts we're done very well. actor did a good job with the training the role as well. Over although in terms of a comedy did not find most of it very humorous.

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