Hot Shot 2 - ID# 202

Riverside Brookfield

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A group of friends come together to play floor hockey, but with a new member. The team decides they need a new teammate and that they will hold tryouts for their "first class style of play". (Excerpt)

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/20 2:37 pm - Successful - Good premise. Good camera moves and overall energy. Good acting. Needs Work - The audio sounded "tinny" in the interview clips. It sounds like an effect was applied to reduce background noise but it also pulled out some of the necessary audio range. This might still be fixable. Also, the focus is not great in many shots, which is not fixable.
• 3/6 11:39 am - Watch the channels in your audio. They seem to switch to mono during the interview portions. A bit of a abrupt start to the film without any real introduction to the film. Seems to have a mockumentary vibe to it. I really enjoyed the lead actor. He did a phenomenal job of acting. Some things to work on is the overall plot. I'm not a hundred percent sure what the focus of this film was as it seems more like a scene out of a larger work. Work on consistency in audio. Also ,setting is very important, this is a film about ice hockey then it should probably be shot at a hockey rink.

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