Minivan - ID# 219

Oak Park River Forest

Cinematography

Entry Description

Cinematography for Cade

Copyright Info

Music provided by a local OPRF band. Given permission by Jack Dwyer - OPRF Student/Band member.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 10:09 pm - Pros - The shots from your narrative pieces are the strongest part of this piece, especially the compositions with different colored lights. Cons - The piece, at times, felt haphazard, with shots seemingly thrown into that do not highlight a strength in visual storytelling. Lots of shaky and soft-focus shots appearing to be autofocus malfunctioning. Would like to see more variety to your imagery as well.
• 4/14 3:24 pm - +I like the shots with the blue and green lights. Nice job playing with gels or colored lights -There are a good number of shaky shots. I would recommend using a tripod more often.

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