Welcome to Marist - ID# 224
Marist
School Promotion
Entry Description
This video gives people a new look inside Marist high school and highlights the key parts of our school.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/22 8:51 am - Your piece includes shots from a wide variety of locations. The viewer is exposed to academic spaces, fine arts spaces, athletic spaces, etc. Some locations on your school's campus are shown empty. Let's see these spaces in use. You will find these shots much more dynamic when they contain some action. Also, let your audience hear what goes on in these spaces. You may want to try mixing nat sound with your montage music. Finally, work on making your shots more steady. At times the viewer is drawn to unnecessary camera movements rather than what's in the frame.
- 3/5 2:04 pm - NIce variety of footage. Good music choice. Nice work!
- 3/3 1:33 pm - Great video showcasing Marist and all the great things going on. Your pans and zooms need to be smoother. The shakiness is noticeable.
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