Set 'Em Up - ID# 241

Homewood-Flossmoor

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

a story about a young girl's nonchalant coming out story and her first date from the help of a good friend.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/20 2:49 pm - Successful - A fun concept. Cool editing style and great cinematography. The waffle scene paid a nice homage to "Requiem For A Dream." Needs Work - The pacing of the dialog felt weird and unnatural, as if chunks were missing. The audio levels were inconsistent, especially in the date scene, where the dialog was very hard to hear. The mannequin head at the end felt too random... that joke might have worked better if there were earlier moments of random things appearing conveniently, or a stronger setup of that tone of storytelling.
• 3/6 11:40 am - The Edgar Wright edit at the beginning was done fairly well, but once the audio started it was clear there were some issues. It's important to make sure that the audio that is recorded is just as clean as the video. There are also some major issues with the bedroom scene and the edits as they go back and forth with their dialogue. also the background noise in the diner setting is distracting and it's recording and in its editing.

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