MMEA Fest

A tour of the outside and inside of Marist high school and it’s athletics

4/17 12:44 pm - Strengths: 1. Video Quality (crisp and colorful shots) 2. Meaningful shot selection (ex. softball sequence with players running to trophy Areas on which to work: 1. Be careful not to let b-roll shots last too long (ex. weight room, football players running) 2. Your piece depicts many locations in your school. In many cases, these spaces are void of students. Let your audience see how the spaces are used. For example, let us see your school's library and planetarium in use. 3. How might you have used your piece's audio track to make this promotion more informative and entertaining? Could we hear the sounds associated with some of the locations depicted in your promotion? Don't just show us what is going on - let us hear what is going on. 4. Would some type of narration help you say more about these spaces and the experiences that occur within them?
3/4 11:01 am - Great variety of well composed shots. Most transitions placed well between two shots. Music fit well.
2/25 1:15 pm - Excellent footage showcasing your school. I liked that you incorporated a lot of what goes on at your school. I felt some of your camera shots were a bit shaky and camera pans were as well. Make sure to try and have one fluent shot. I liked that you also had some body camera footage, this is a nice change of pace during the video.

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