What are you willing to risk? - ID# 250

Wheaton North

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

At Wheaton North High School, like many high schools in the country vaping has become an epidemic with teens. With hundreds of additive flavors. One in five teens at Wheaton North had admitted to vaping. This PSA was made to give teens the information they deserve.

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https://app.gmpmusic.com/ords/f?p=110:14:10401017828936::NO:14::

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 11:12 am - I really like your use of statistics in this project. However, since this is a contest entry, make sure you are using appropriate capitalization and punctuation. I know that you can't necessarily show students vaping in this project. However, the project title is "What are you willing to risk?" As your viewer, I want to see these great aspects of student life that could be risked- the basketball scholarship, student council elections, friendships. What exactly is being risked for students? Show us this and I think you will have an even more powerful video! I liked the "1 in 5" section at the end where you showed 5 students. That was powerful!
• 3/7 10:32 pm - Interesting concept. Good video. 2nd graphic not up long enough to read. Big vape? Is this a company? Capitalization. If you don't want to capitalize the first word for a style, that's fine, but you need to capitalize proper nouns. Video ends but the music just keeps going.

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