Class Clowns - ID# 252
Marist
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
Four students competing against each other while doing embarrassing tasks throughout the school building, and the person who refuses the most gets the worst punishment.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/19 11:29 am - Successful - This had a good premise. Some of the pranks were funny. A nice attempt that creating content for the high school demographic. Needs Work - This isn't technically a comedic narrative, or even fiction. This seems to be a fun segment from a news program or a YouTube channel. Not very much production value. Generally not very comedic. If this was a mockumentary, there was potential for lots of humorous moments, had they been written to be bigger and funnier.
- 3/6 11:35 am - I don’t find any real story here. There are no characters or plot in this film. It's much more of a comedic television show than a film. The sound that is used needs work as does the camera stabilization and Lighting.
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