The Chase - ID# 312
Shepard High School
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
A daily loop of betrayal between two friends. Phone snatching is a very serious event as they spend most of there time together chasing each other around the school causing many mishaps.
Copyright Info
https://youtu.be/yGfRTTSD_Bg
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/19 11:20 am - Successful - This had a really simple and fun premise. The story was clear and it was a good choice to end with a "here we go again" moment. Great acting. All of the silent/physical comedy was performed well and the jokes were funny. Music was good. Needs Work - In the opening title screen, "The chase" should have been capitalized, and probably without quotes. To maintain the silent film aesthetic a little better, all of the shots should have been on a tripod, not handheld.
- 3/6 11:34 am - I enjoyed the attempt at a “Gag” film in the style of Buster Keaton, but overall the film lacked the polish and depth I’d like to see at this level. More work can be done with narrative to make it more complex. Even old Chaplin and keaton films dealt with complex issues in a humorous way.
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