Rat Amongst The Thieves - ID# 322

Shepard High School
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Entry Description

Rat Amongst the Thieves is a thrilling modern day mafia story about a Kingpin who discovers evidence of a rat (snitch) in the group. This discovery leads the group into chaos.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-i4NYDP0Ug&feature=youtu.be

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/23 11:29 pm - A promising opening that sets an intriguing mood with clear tension in the air. Falls flat when the first closeup of a character is out of focus. Makes it hard to follow the stakeholders in the story. The costuming and production design are nice and support the genre. The story fails to develop far enough for the viewer to know if they want to invest. Yes, there is a rat, but why does that matter? Could have benefitted from the use of some artificial lighting; reliance of all practical sources made for some underexposure and lack of fill, causing loss of detail in the shadows and other areas where actors' faces needed to be seen.
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