Jacky Springer - ID# 339

Back of the Yards College Prep

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A short comedy parody of "Jerry Springer"

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 10:34 pm - Successful - A fun and entertaining concept. The bad production value actually works to add comedy. Good improv acting and good energy from the the actors. Needs Work - The main issue is the bad green screen effect. Although it's funny at first, sometimes it gets distracting.The ending feels too sudden, as if you didn't quite know how to end it, so the host says goodbye.
• 4/22 9:22 pm - I applaud your effort and I like the enthusiasm your actors bring. However, this feels very unscripted and like a lot of yelling with a couple beats built in to try and tell a bit of a narrative. There are skills that need to be developed still to really succeed in a narrative category, notably with attempting different camera angles, hitting dialogue points to move a story forward, and comedic punchlines and blocking (with both the actors and the camera shot/angle) in order to really deliver the message and tone you're going for. Keep at it, this group has a lot of energy and can produce some great work in the future.
• 3/6 11:44 am - This seems less like a film and more like a television show or a spoof of a television show. The green screen work needs some fixing and the lack of production in this category is clear.

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