Skateboard Jungle - ID# 366

Mundelein

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Story about how an unexpected hero shows up to help a victim of two bullies who have stolen the wallet of the victim. Created as a silent film.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/10 11:55 am - Positives: Great falling sequence @2:00! Nice cut to the credits at the end. Areas for improvement: More shot variety needed; the fear of the kid that gets mugged isn't depicted very strongly-- they don't seem menacing or intimidating; this could partially be due to the music which seemed a bit perky at that point, or that we never see a close-up shot of the victim, only medium shots. Split screen @1:07 should both be POV shots.
• 3/9 7:41 pm - cool angles and credit transition is smooth

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