This is live coverage of a dance routine to Hopeless Wanderer from Glenbrook South's Variety Show.
Hopeless Wanderer by Mumford and Sons.
Positives: Good use of dissolve effect between camera shots, supported the artistic piece. Camera work and selection well done.
Improvements: Additional close-up camera shots would have been nice.
Positives: You nailed the last shot with the wide shot. Very nice variety of shots and movements.
Improvements: Making the cuts from camera to camera go in rhythm with the music would help a lot. As the director you should not take a shot if the camera op is not ready. Have the camera ops practice moves before the show and name some of those movements so that you can call them and the camera op knows what you are talking about.
Positives: Great pacing in the dissolves - just fast enough for the song without being too slow. A lot of action in mid-shots.
Improvements: Needed more natural audio to make it feel like a live event and less like a music video. Too much dead space in some wide shots and some errors in mid-shots.
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