Perpetual - ID# 409
Metea Valley
Dramatic Narrative
Entry Description
A young woman breaks a mysterious crystal with unintended consequences.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/16 7:56 pm - I like the way you assembled your story, you use your camera and a variety of shots to keep your story moving. You also have it edited at a pace the doesn’t make the story drag. I had a hard time following what was going on, when I get to the end it all comes together, but I was frustrated the first time through wondering where it was going. I felt like I was watching several clips that were well put together individually, but I wasn’t sure how they all fit together as a story. I liked the creativity of the opening, but still not sure how it fit with the rest of the piece, I can make inferences, but again during the story the first time through I was trying to figure it all out.
- 3/10 11:18 am - Positives: Beautiful montage of nature shots in the opening; very effective sound design, using music and audio effects to enhance your story. Solid manipulation of the audio to be the voice in her head. Areas for improvement: Although there is a series of three unexplained events that get more severe with each one, the tension doesn't really build through the story. Also, clear your set of items that don't add to the story, or may be distracting. The pile of shoes near the front door takes me out of her story line, thinking where are the rest of those people?
- 3/9 7:39 pm - good attempt at variety of shots...not always executed
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