Jared Rosenthal, Jonathan Lidskin, and Logan Rosengard discuss various athletic teams around Glenbrook North High School.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KmFIzRZqACw
Positives: Love that this is all focused on your school and includes lots of interviews and highlights - content that you are best suited to be the primary provider of. Hearing from the athletes/coaches adds a lot to your discussion and analysis. The talent is well informed and prepared; clearly knows what they're talking about relative to the sports/teams being discussed.
Improvements: Watch some of the production elements. The music at the start was loud, and some of the b-roll came in with loud NATS audio that made it hard to hear the talent. Most of the piece seemed very dark, including the studio and game highlights. Having the analysts walk on the set didn't work for me. Have them there already as you shift and begin to talking about a new sport.
Positives: - The talent was very strong on air. They presented the information and did great with hand motions not being too over enthusiastic. The hockey analyst provided great detail into everything he spoke about showing a strong knowledge of the team and their players. - I liked that there were two different analysts that each spoke about their expertise. Gives more life to them as reporters. You want to hear what they have to say because of the dedication to the specific sport.
Improvements: - There were some things I would have done differently with the production itself. There were little audio blips throughout and the bed music in the first thirty seconds sounded too loud. That can make it hard to understand the talent. Also some of the segment interviews were out of focus. - I would work on the shot angles from the studio set up. The angles left too much head space on close ups or two much open space to the right of the two shot with the host and hockey analyst. - BONUS - The b-ball analyst's tie needed a bit of straightening :)
Positives: Very strong performance by the hosts, especially Jared. His enthusiasm came across, as did his knowledge. He did a nice job interacting with the other hosts. Great use of highlights, interviews, and graphics to keep things moving.
Improvements: The set could be jazzed up a bit. Looks a little dreary for a sports program. Some of the b-roll looked a little dark.
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