The Quarterbacks Story: Mark Gronowski - ID# 403
Neuqua Valley
Natural Audio News Package
Entry Description
A feature story on varsity quarterback Mark Gronowski
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/1 3:23 pm - At first I didn't like the open, but then I liked it. Good concept. Need a transition from :08 to daylight/field. Access to youth football content was great. Having him read a prepared script instead of using interview sound bites is odd. Walking onto field at :35 is a great shot. But around :42 it's hitting me that I'm not hearing any natsot under bites - kind of the basis for this category. Need transitions between day/night b-roll. This ended-up playing more like an athletic resume and less like a natsot piece.
- 2/25 7:08 am - On the positive side, you had a ton of good b-roll to help visually tell the story, and the majority of your natural sound was smoothly integrated. HOWEVER..."I am Mark Gronowski" - the opening shot of your subject was poorly lit. There is a difference between dramatic high-contrast lighting, and not enough light. That shot didn't have enough lighting. Also, this category specifically prohibits narration tracks; the voice over of Gronowski reading his script is very clearly a narration track.
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