A Story About Collaboration - ID# 43

Glenbrook South

School Promotion

Entry Description

Video featuring five different activities and groups of students at Glenbrook South High School and the steps they take while collaborating on projects.

Copyright Info

Written permission to use music by De Wolfe Music

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 11:03 am - Your promotion emphasizes an relevant message - the value placed on collaboration in the learning process at your school. In addition, you show students enthusiastically engaged in learning. You also chose effective b-roll for this piece. You show a number of activities and include a wide range of students. In addition, your b-roll shots are taken from a variety camera positions. By the way, you also kept your text statements very concise! Some of your shot sequences could have depicted the collaboration between students more clearly. Also, I am wondering if you could have moved your text around so it would not compete with the action occurring in the frame. Finally, we get to see collaboration taking place, but could we also hear it taking place? Do not underestimate the power of nat sound. I would've liked to hear bits and pieces of audio that contained some meaningful collaboration.
• 3/5 2:15 pm - Great creative idea using the sound effect with the graphics. It did get a bit repetitive. Most of the footage looked good. The edit was clean. Good job!
• 3/5 1:26 pm - Great editing skill by adding the text and sound effects. The video consisted of a lot of great variation in camera shots. I would add some more background noise, possibly from the B-Roll ontop of this.

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