Evening Drive - ID# 434
Huntley
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
The effects of drinking and driving
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- 4/23 9:03 am - I liked many of your close up shots and you did a great job creating the sense that this person has been hit by car. However, while there is a clear call to action, it is not clear that this person was drinking while in the car. While you can't show alcohol in MMEA, you could use audio to create "party music" to show that this person was leaving a place where he or she was drinking. Some minor tweaks like this would help to set the beginning of this narrative.
- 3/7 3:43 pm - I'm not quite sure how this is drinking and driving. It just shows someone at night.I couldn't tell at first that it was a car door closing. Did some of your audio not get exported? You should have had sfx of the car starting and engine picking up speed. Is the ending a back up alarm beeping? After listening to it a few more times I'm guessing it is a heart beat monitor.
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