4/23 9:30 am - You have some great shots of your dog in this project! It can often be hard to direct animals as actors! However, this project is missing a clear call to action at the end. What is it that you want your audience to do? If you want them to adopt a dog, make sure you tell them! I would also try to record your voice over using a microphone in your next cut. You sound a little "distant" using the on board camera mic/phone mic. I think incorporating some music would also make this a more effective PSA- using some music could help create a hopeful, helpful, and upbeat tone for this project!
3/7 9:14 pm - Cute storyline. Turn the autofocus off. In some shots it is going all over the place. Also, try to use a wired microphone next time instead of the internal one. It will pick up your voice better.