Robotics Club - ID# 445
Metea Valley
News Package
Entry Description
News Package highlighting the Robotics Club latest district competition. MUSIC BY UKIYO http://smarturl.it/ukiyoau http://instagram.com/ukiyoau/
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Copyright-free music by Ukiyo -- http://www.ukiyomusic.com From http://www.ukiyomusic.com/contact.html: If you make personal, un-monetised videos or monetised videos with less than 1M subscribers You're free to use my music provided you credit m
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 6:34 pm - I like that you chose a unique topic to your community to highlight. I second the comments below and do not want to be redundant. I think you can improve on your framing and watch those audio levels. I also think that this piece should be color corrected. If you are an underclassman, keep making pieces. If you are a senior, I wish you the best in your future and congratulations!
- 3/16 8:18 pm - This story was hard to follow for a couple of reasons The music was a little loud, and distracting and the style of the music made me feel like there was something wrong with my speakers because it has a sound that seems to go in and out. The voice over narration seems to go really fast, what you have to say is relevant but you say it all at such a quick pace and with little pause it just all blends together after a while and nothing stands out. Slow down next time, and put some pauses in here or there – this will give your audience a chance to digest on what they heard, and make certain points you make stand out. n example of this is at 20 seconds. This story doesn’t have a main character, granted I know you are covering an event but as you talk about individual teams give a visual of them. Because your Broll was so generic after a while it just all looked the same. The best stories are usually about people, not that you have to single out an individual, but let your B roll at least capture the emotion of a team/member. I think the only shat that really captured this was the one at 1:02, everything else just seemed like wide shots that captured everything and yet at the same time nothing. Zoom in, and let the story be less about the event, and instead about the people at the event. You did a great job summarizing the story and putting it together, just make sure you tell the story with your footage too, and slow the pace down so your audience can keep up. Especially when all the teams (and the competitors) look the same.
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