Top Golf Promo - ID# 454
Metea Valley
School Promotion
Entry Description
A promo for a PTA hosted fundraising event to promote school spirit at Top Golf in Naperville, IL.
Copyright Info
Copyright-free music provided through paid subscription to SoundStripe (www.soundstripe.com)
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/17 1:24 pm - Strengths: 1. Quality video (crisp images, appropriately white balanced) 2. Effective shot composition 3. Camera movements are smooth and precise. Well done! Areas on which to work: 1. You included a number of effective shots depicting the exterior of the facility. How might you have put more emphasis on what happens within this business (other than shots of the food available to patrons)? What are the activities one can participate in when one goes there? Make your viewer want to go inside! 2. Watch the ratio between primary and secondary audio tracks (ex. near end of promo).
- 3/4 11:06 am - Great variety of well composed shots. Movement and static shots were put together well. Music audio levels were too high at points. Graphics were a good font for the event type.
- 2/25 1:21 pm - Great use of multiple camera angles and sound effects. Your pans were very smooth and fitting for the video. The text could have used some pop to bring it to our attention more though as sometimes it was on the screen quickly.
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