4/23 10:14 pm - Pros - Interesting story concept and nice pacing throughout. The protagonist was clear from the beginning. Nice elegant titling, minus the stock credit screen at the end; the yellow is out of place for the rest of the trailer. Cons - Not a clear conflict and much is still unknown to decide of the viewer wants to actually go see the film. The exposure is a little up at down at times and the white balance is not always consistent from shot to shot or as the environments change. The license plate blur at the beginning was distracting and seemed unnecessary.
4/23 3:33 pm - Pros: Good trailer. It had good pacing and built to a nice crescendo. Good establishment of conflict and mystery. You music was well chosen and your audio was well mixed between the music and the voice over. Improvements: Develop a protagonist that the audience can follow and care about. I don't know who any of the characters are in this trailer and that's keeping me from engaging in it further.