Hype Nation!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9gIQrh2kcA0
Positives: Great show of school spirit with students in the stands and ENERGY from the crowd - makes me want to participate! Diverse sports shown and wide range of students in participation
Improvements: What is the story? A lot of action but lacked focus around a theme - mascot? school colors?, etcc.. Would like to have heard sound of student body - cheering, articulating value of participation?
Positives: The bass drum with the music was a great shot. I like the crowd shots and how close you get to them, but I think there could be more close up shots. You do a good job of matching to the music during the video and I like the graphic at the end
Improvements: Try to use more close-up shots when making this type of video, show the emotion of the players. A couple of random shots in the video make it confusing. Why is there someone on a hoverboard, is this normal? There are some shots in the studio, why? At the start, it seems like a hype video for the sports teams, but then it shows other parts of the school.
Positives: Love the beginning shot and end shot. great way to use your crowd shots- and I liked that you included This Is Huntley graphics as a message at the end! Edited very nicely to the song! Good rhythm and flow. Very inclusive about the many activities students can do at school!
Improvements: I liked the effect that you used at :08-- would have liked you to pull that feel in throughout the piece
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