A Couple of Cuties - ID# 472

Maine West

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

This is a short animation project about two oranges.

Copyright Info

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUtQmK7N_Sw https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_DCl9hE2gnM https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glXrZyQZqG8 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyU0-hhl18

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 10:14 pm - Successful - Fun concept and very creative. Good animation and variety of shots. Music worked well to set the various moods. Needs Work - Focus was off in many of the shots. The frame rate of the live action was not 24 fps, which made it stand out too much. The voice of the orange was not necessary.
• 4/22 9:08 pm - This takes a tremendous amount of effort, I applaud the effort and the outcome of the animation and movement of the objects definitely works. Nice job to all those involved. My advice is to work on storytelling. You have a lot of build up here and for a comedic piece, we should have more build up and punchline, more buildup and punchline, repeat. Keep up the amazing effort and work, you're off to a great start!
• 3/6 11:43 am - A very creative use of stop-motion animation that was done fairly effectively. The overall story was lacking a complete plot and while there are elements that were interesting I don't know that I found much of it very humorous. Consider working more on the story and the plot and then use the animation to deliver the message.

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