IKEA's Jane Doe - ID# 486

Wheeling High School

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two strangers come across a Jane Doe in the big world of IKEA. Learning her struggles of life, the two help her escape into the real world.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/20 3:29 pm - Successful - This was a fun concept. There were a few clever jokes and visual gags. Good editing. Needs Work - The post-sync audio is inconsistent and ends up sounding unnatural and detracting from the film. The acting feels awkward, but that's probably because of the voice dubbing.
• 3/6 11:42 am - To begin with the audio overall mix need some adjustment. The voice overs and the music seemed to be at the same level so it's very difficult to hear the dialogue. To be honest the audio quality distracts from the entire film and makes it very difficult to follow. Also I don't quite get the premise of the film.

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