GBN Boys Bowling Promo - ID# 487
Glenbrook North
School Promotion
Entry Description
A Promotional video for the GBN Boys Varsity Bowling team
Copyright Info
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKW6FF7BmMg https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4D-LoMTbvx4&list=PLLQ4nZ1NZdXk_UB2H1xONgd-QKtlX8tUJ&index=18
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/22 12:06 pm - Strengths: 1. Video quality is quite good, especially for a bowling alley where lighting could present some issues. 2. You incorporated shots with varied compositions taken from a range of camera positions 3. Unlike many other sports-related promotions in this category, you included nat sound! Well done! Imagine how different this piece would be without these audio elements. Areas on which to work: 1. How might you have made your graphics stand out more effectively? 2. Although you provide the viewer with a steady diet of new shots, the structure of this piece yields a repetitive feel. Could you have added more variety to the way in which the bowlers are introduced? 3. The structure of the piece also places a lot of emphasis on the individual bowlers, What might you have done to put more emphasis on the team concept? How could you give the sense that the bowlers feel a sense of "team." 4. While this is difficult to do, I wish you would have done more with focus as balls moved down the lane. By pulling focus, you could have kept the ball in focus during the entire shot.
- 3/5 2:22 pm - I really liked the close ups. Graphics with the still of the player was great. Good music choice. Great job!
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