A live broadcasting from Homewood-Flossmoor High School, featuring news, sports, weather and more!
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Positives: Hidden Gems package well done Good work by anchors coming out of the Hidden Gems package
Improvements: Could have used more video full in opening stories Could have used nat sound in the Coach Crews package
Positives: Like the headlines at the top of the show. Headlines grab the viewers attention and make them want to watch. Nice news open! Really like teasing to sports to help viewers stay tuned. Great personality between the two anchors. They bounce off of each other really well. Stories are short and sweet. Easy for the viewer to listen. Nice ad lib from the anchors to talk about the runnings coming by the school The personality from the meteorologist is fantastic! He kept me interested the entire time and I wanted to hear more about the weather.
Improvements: The lighting on the two anchors are different. The anchor on the left is lit really bright, and the other anchor has shadows on her face. Be careful with lighting! The reporter dated the walk story by instantly saying the date at the beginning. Always think about how you can forward the story. With the second package, be careful in not to date the story again. The reporter talked past tense throughout the story. Think of how you can forward a story and make the viewer interested. Behind the sports anchor there is a shadow on the wall. Maybe add a key light to stop that from happening. Why behind the interview of the volleyball coach is the background black? That looks strange. Interview him in the gym. Interview the players in the classroom, hall or the gym. The black background is distracting for the viewer.
Positives: good job editing/using nats on packages Like that you had a mix of school/community features
Improvements: minor - but you need a little more head room on the shots with the video box. On some of them you're cutting off the anchors head. During the cancer walk there was an interview with a woman and you could see the mic cord. If they can't put it down their shirt, consider draping the cord over their back. it just looks cleaner
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