Kyries - ID# 519
Batavia
Commercial
Entry Description
A basketball player finds the right shoes to get her game on.
Copyright Info
digitaljuice.com
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 1:38 pm - Nike - basketball… Effects seem gratuitous and uncontrolled
- 3/10 10:32 am - Okay - so, we never see the girl basketball player. Why not? When we hear a voice from someone, as a testimonial for the product, we expect to see the person. Your deep-friend shots of the shoes and the low-angle shot of the hoop were cool, but that's not enough. You needed to see more of the basketball player shooting, driving to the hoop for a lay up, or other practice/game footage. Basically, you need visual proof that the shoes make a difference in her game.
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