Turning Out - ID# 530
Lake Forest
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
A summer of fun and adventure
Copyright Info
Aries beats - Turbo Rush
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 11:17 pm - Pros - Very bold move to set this story in the past. It draws attention to your production design, which was strong and loyal to the era. The color palette enhanced the feeling of nostalgia as well. Cons - Although the main characters appeared to be introduced, there is not much of a story on display, past the setting. The camera in unnecessarily shaky at times and the sound mix is out of sync and cuts off dialogue in parts. A well developed conflict to follow would have made these issues seem smaller.
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