MMEA Fest

Boys will be Bugs, you know what I mean

4/23 7:49 pm - It was a cute story. It took awhile to build for me. I wanted the shots to be a little more with the music, like when the clothes were going in the pile later. Some of your framing was off through out, and though it may have been done on purpose, it felt off to the viewer. I really liked the cut from the girl jumping to the boy jumping. That was executed nicely. Nice job!
3/5 8:06 pm - This is an excellent coming of age video and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I loved seeing the view of the boy's room and seeing him getting ready for his day as compared to the girl who was far more choosy about how to prepare for her day. I liked seeng both of them look in the mirror to take a look at themselves. I also like how you transitioned from the girl jumping on her bed over to the kids jumping on the trampoline in the yard. Great transition. I liked the shot of her through the trampoline net/opening holdng her braid looking hesitant and then the boys staring out at her and the young boy who is trying to get her attention. Great job! Just very enjoyable. The filming was very clear and crisp and colorful and youthful.

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